Christian @ Elm Park School : Me putting adverbs in my story

Wednesday, 12 November 2014

I am learning to use adverbs in my writing. My next step is to put more adjectives and heaps more adverbs!!! in my Awesome writing.

Karen Allen said...: Hey Christian this is a great story that tells me that if you do bad things you will get caught. I like the way you have used different sentence starters. Mrs Allen; 13 November 2014 at 12:27
Mumma said...: Hey Mr C
I really like your story, and I am so pleased that Craby lived happily ever after once that bully got caught.; 18 November 2014 at 13:15
Anonymous said...: You have a great imagination, Christian, what a great story!; 2 December 2014 at 10:13