Friday 13 June 2014

My diamante poem

I am learing to use adjectives verbs  and adverbs in my writing to make it more interesting.  It was tricky to fit in the ing words.  My next step is to use more  describing wordes to make my writing more interesting for  the reder.  I am prawd of my poem because I uesd lots of ing wrodes in my poem.


1 comment:

Mumma said...

Hey Mr C
I really like your Diamante Poem. I liked the end of the poem best. The beginning of the poem doesn't sound very nice :-)