My Reflection
Walt: Edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback
I got some feedback from Daniel he pointed out that it said cool amazing activities so he said why don't you change it to awesomely cool amazing activities to do
Next time I could use more interesting words and use a Thesaurus and try to use some more interesting words I could also sit next to some that gives really good feedback
2 comments:
Was the run really surprisingly boring? Lol.....love the poem Mr C.
I enjoyed reading your camp merc acrostic poem Christian and all the fun activities that you did at camp. Remember it is important to take the time to always edit your writing so that you keep the reader interested in your writing.
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